Thursday, April 2, 2009

So What If I am Blind !

Posted by I Zaydi at Thursday, April 02, 2009


So What If I am Blind !


I can't see the colours, can't praise them like you can,
I can't jump on floor on beds in happiness like you can,
I can't hug my friends rushing towards them like you can,
As All the time I have to hold a stick, have to note every skip,

So What If I am Blind !

Though you can shout with fear watching movies,
And you can see languid on people's faces,
By attending parties you can easily bewitch people,
This all you can do but there is none what i can,

So What If I am Blind !

If I cant show the flickers in my eyes, So what !
If I even cant see the thundering nights, So what!
If mirth is all by eyes and chant by ears, So what!
I can't feel the pleasure I cant hear the intones, So what!

So What If I am Blind !

If everything, you have to deem and you have to appraise
I relent not easily for what then,
As i heed all for myself, as I am the decreed
I grin always as I feel no shame,

So What If I am Blind !

So What If I cant see the colours, the light,
And its you who sees thunders not the loneliness,
Yes it's you who can see everything but have zilch for feeling it,
And here its me who feels everything but can see nothing..

So What If I am Blind !
-illusiOn~
P.S( Thank you Maveric for the help Love u for this)
P.S.S( the credit goes to mav for refining it.. )

 

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8 Comments:

  1. Maverick said...
    April 2, 2009 at 3:47 PM  
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    Maverick said...
    April 2, 2009 at 3:49 PM  
    I told u already, Insiya! This one's so very deep and beautiful! The thought behind it is so intense and intricate that I luvd it da instant u showed it to me! Time will turn you into an awesome poet, from the wonderful one you already are, coz u hav da imagination required, and the ability to feel the subject!
    Am so glad I read dis, nd cld help u out in small ways! :)

    P.S & P.S.S : u dint hav to mention my name in da post! ill help nytime! :)
    scarface said...
    April 2, 2009 at 4:59 PM  
    very nice and intriguining...
    scarface said...
    April 2, 2009 at 5:01 PM  
    very nice and intriguing...
    Anonymous said...
    April 2, 2009 at 5:47 PM  
    If mirth is all by eyes and chant by ears, So what!
    I can't feel the pleasure I cant hear the intones, So what!

    i like these n
    lines,

    over all attempt was nice. but instead of languish in first verse use LANGUID..

    :)
    I Zaydi said...
    April 3, 2009 at 8:04 PM  
    The pleasure is all mine..
    Tan said...
    April 3, 2009 at 10:12 PM  
    Great write... I dont know how much was refined, but even it was, the thought was good!!!

    Request:
    Will you REMOVE the WORD VERIFICATION? Its kinda irritating at times ...
    I Zaydi said...
    April 4, 2009 at 3:18 PM  
    Tan
    how to remove it i dont know.. :|

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