Friday, March 27, 2009



Mujhe bas ik nazm likhni hai,
Aisi nazm k,
Jjiski ibteda tm ho,
Inteha main hon,
Jiski bunyad tm ho,
Khameer main hon,
Jiska wajood tm ho,
Jazbaat main hon,
Jiska khaloos tm ho,
Aitemaad main hon,
Jiska ka safar tm ho,
Manzil main hon,
Jiski tamheed tm ho,
Mazmoom main hon,
Magar karun kia,
Likhon ye sab magar,
Magar kaise?
K tm ho kar bhi yun ho,
K lagta hai naheen ho,
Kaho kahon kaise,
Jo is dil main bhara hai,
Kahon kaise,
K mjhe to ik nazm likhni hai,
Aisi nazm k,
Jiska unwaan tm ho,
Kahani main hon,
Bs ik aisi nazm likhni hai,
Kaho tm he likhon kaise?
Mjhe jo ik nazm likhni hai.
-illusiOn~

7 Comments:

  1. Sinner said...
    quite impressiv!!
    illusiOn said...
    :)
    Arnav said...
    impressive :) amazing :)

    here is my attempt at poems :

    http://arnavspeaks.blogspot.com/search/label/Poem
    illusiOn said...
    @ Arnav!

    Thanks !

    Your work was wonderful.. better then mine..
    Arnav said...
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    Arnav said...
    @illusion

    hey thanks for the visit and compliment

    but I think , two pieces of creativity, should not be and cannot be compared.
    Each figment of creativity has its own unique beauty : )

    keep smiling
    cheers!
    illusiOn said...
    Thanks.. :)

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