Saturday, January 31, 2009
Come With Me Before I Leave!
Death is on its way,
But before leaving you behind,
All alone on your own,
I've a feeling,
I should return once to you,
All the precious moments,
That you really deserve,
I want to hug you,
Kiss you and embrace you,
Like never before,
So that whenever you see yourself,
in a mirror or in someone's eyes,
It reminds you the love of mine,
The feel of mine,
As i want to live in you,
Yes! I knw i am in you,
But after me i know,
Your life will not stop,
Even i dont want so,
As all i want is just to,
INSPIRE YOU!
-Illusion!
Words Count: 107
I am sorry ppl but ever since the competition started my mind is filled with words and I swear words are forcing me to write :$
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frankly speaking...tht was good effort linking death and inspiration...but rationally it didnt go well together...but the final product...the poem was really good...
i was thinkng to change the last line though...